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Nov 1Liked by Chen Rafaeli

I knew I needed quiet to do the reading of this justice - so now I’m left with images and gratifying vengeance - and it’s my mood very much as I’m not sleeping enough with this political season here…. I love it, Chen.

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Thank you so much, Patris-really happy you like it, for truly I rushed with it, like crazy, and as usual didn't quite like this or that, and then screwed up inserting the link, and whatnot.

Thank you 🪶❤️

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Nov 1Liked by Chen Rafaeli

It’s powerful Chen, just as it is 👌🏼

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Beautiful work. This poem song is rich in imagery and the subtle hints of revenge. There is no rest for the injustice. The hurt is not detailed but the scars run deep like the "child of wind" line sends chills.

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Thank you so very much, dear Writer Pilgrim

the original song is , I guess , inspired by a saga that I never read myself, where God of Wind is mentioned, must be several gods too, as the other guy is "master of water and grass".

Usually I dive into some deeper research, but here I indeed wanted to stay with the imagery, and first impressions.

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It was gorgeous. Again not knowing the original saga or song, you told a story beautifully in that poem.

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oh and thank you for the restack! 💫

they don't let me to leave the comment under the Note, which happens sometimes.

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Might be something in your settings. Or which note do you mean? When you restack?

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Usually when somebody else restacks/leaves a Note-and it comes and goes, no rhyme no reason to it.

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Restack or restack with a note are the two options you get when you click on the third symbol of the two circular arrows. You’ve probably seen it so ignore this message if you already know. Sometimes it goes to restack automatically unless you pick the one where you can write a note too. But it may have settings that are different on your device or account. I can for instance not click on the like symbol unless I view on Activities.

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Oh I know-no problem with that(not to jinx it))

the problem is with leaving the comment under it afterwards

by the way. oh I'll ask maybe in one of your SPAWN hours post

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..thank you so much, for sharing this, Portia 🪄🩵

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