There is a lot of wisdom in part 1 of this, Chen, and I was especially taken with this advice, which I regard as insightful, and something to remember:
"Don’t be envious of anyone. You’ve no idea what fight they’re fighting, fought, or will fight later, maybe even later today."
"pockets full of that rye. But also, keep the rye mostly in the pockets."
Ergot one hell of a St Vitus dance. I do believe write from the heart.
Say what you will. There's a clap of thunder, for a few seconds, rumbling over the hills. Ligtnig is bright. Shows you showers and gold. There's a delete button, pushed by powers that be. It's the cloud you mst worry about. How long does anything stay if you have the magic key? Voices, mot too loud, someone may be listening. Let's keep this secret. Between you and me. Merci beaucoup, Buku buttercup.
Keys get lost. Stay? Why care? Words get stale like leftovers. Move on. Get a different lock. It will get broken into. Nothing's sacred. Some one steals your heart. I left mine many places, but like a lost dog managed to find a way home to beat a new path and drums along the Mohawk Trail of many tears gone bye.
the maxims are the voices in my head, some from my parents and family-early childhood etc, some, other places. Some, me myself probably. I don't know. Constant noise. It's just a sample of it. Pretty tiresome. I'm mostly sticking by them anyway, but.
As I was cooking this past hour - my mother in laws recipe for a convoluted meal my husband does miss - I had your poet running through my head, wondering even now what is (among others) the question we seek the answer to above all, when we’re not too busy living life as it happens.. for myself I tend to think ‘why are we here’ - any given moment, or in every past moment we can recall —
thank you Chen for the meditation.. I will have, of course, no answer sufficient to satisfy my brain, except maybe just to wait for ‘when the moment comes’
you most probably did but I most probably went the way of " ніхто мене не любить, ніхто не приголубить", I really hate this way and don't understand why I go there all the time like there are no other places much more interesting to be in
so yes, thank you, big thank you for saying it again, dear Paul
There is a lot of wisdom in part 1 of this, Chen, and I was especially taken with this advice, which I regard as insightful, and something to remember:
"Don’t be envious of anyone. You’ve no idea what fight they’re fighting, fought, or will fight later, maybe even later today."
thank you, Martin
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and big thank you for the restack.
the platform has its own mood today-it often doesn't let me comment under the notes
"pockets full of that rye. But also, keep the rye mostly in the pockets."
Ergot one hell of a St Vitus dance. I do believe write from the heart.
Say what you will. There's a clap of thunder, for a few seconds, rumbling over the hills. Ligtnig is bright. Shows you showers and gold. There's a delete button, pushed by powers that be. It's the cloud you mst worry about. How long does anything stay if you have the magic key? Voices, mot too loud, someone may be listening. Let's keep this secret. Between you and me. Merci beaucoup, Buku buttercup.
"How long does anything stay if you have the magic key?"
merci a vous, dear Richard
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Keys get lost. Stay? Why care? Words get stale like leftovers. Move on. Get a different lock. It will get broken into. Nothing's sacred. Some one steals your heart. I left mine many places, but like a lost dog managed to find a way home to beat a new path and drums along the Mohawk Trail of many tears gone bye.
i can't
but. maybe i'll move on differently
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Thank you for the restack, dear Buku
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Big thank you for the restack, Sandra
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I am curious, where did all those maxims come from? As always, new or old, a poem is very emotional and interesting.
Thank you, dear Larisa
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the maxims are the voices in my head, some from my parents and family-early childhood etc, some, other places. Some, me myself probably. I don't know. Constant noise. It's just a sample of it. Pretty tiresome. I'm mostly sticking by them anyway, but.
The maxims you wrote look so accomplished that I thought they were from some old source. So, please, there is no "but," smart girl.
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thank you so much for sharing this, dear David
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thank you so much for the restack, rena ✨🌻💚
-find whatever holds you together and play with it if you can, gently. Let it be your “Thou”.
-or else it’ll play with you harshly
Love the wisdom in this post, Chen!
Thank you, Siodha, dear -thank you
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and thank you for sharing it
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Voices on the street and then the familiar of the street itself - a lot to channel here and deftly handled.
Thank you so much, Brendan💫
...and for the restack.
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.. acceptance and tenderness here, and the wisdom to be patient
thank you, dear Patris
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As I was cooking this past hour - my mother in laws recipe for a convoluted meal my husband does miss - I had your poet running through my head, wondering even now what is (among others) the question we seek the answer to above all, when we’re not too busy living life as it happens.. for myself I tend to think ‘why are we here’ - any given moment, or in every past moment we can recall —
thank you Chen for the meditation.. I will have, of course, no answer sufficient to satisfy my brain, except maybe just to wait for ‘when the moment comes’
you just gave me an enlightment, Patris
thank you❤️
As you do me, Chen 🙏
and big thank you for the restack💕
(can't comment there. maddenning.)
big thank you for the restack, dear Mahdi
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Words to live by, mostly. I try but forget then remember and try again. Lovely poem, Chen. Did I ever tell you I love your writing? I do. I just did.
you most probably did but I most probably went the way of " ніхто мене не любить, ніхто не приголубить", I really hate this way and don't understand why I go there all the time like there are no other places much more interesting to be in
so yes, thank you, big thank you for saying it again, dear Paul
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oh, big thank you for sharing too 💫💫
Much good advice. "A road traveled, not an arrival." What fun is anything if getting there is misery?
Thank you, Richard💫
I love your writing, Chen. Please share--always share! 🖤
Thank you, dear Fotini ❤️
Thank you
thank you for sharing it, too
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